Fallon in the Water: Remix

I finally decided to start over again on this picture. I'm coming at it a different way, and I should have an easier time finishing now that I know the problems I was having last time.

This time its all warm and sunsetty, hah.

Oh, and of course this is a WIP

[Edit 10/14/07]
Updated the image, changed the skin, hair and a lot of the water coloration. But most of the changes are pretty subtle, other than the addition of new water, etc.

[Edit 10/25/07]
Updated the image again. Mostly just more water detailing, and playing with the water's shine. I may end up changing the dress part to match the style I was using for this.

[Edit 11/1/07] I'm experimenting with putting some land into the background. More water editing, blah blah blah.

[Edit 11/13/07] This is now getting to a point where I can almost call it done. I added in clouds on a whim. You should have seen them in the first few hours of their fluffy little lives. They looked like nimbus puke. All that's left really is some final changes to the water (needs to be pinker) and Fallon.

[Edit 11/17/07] Last upload, I'm done with this picture. I put a watermark on it myself because I hate the deviantart one. Added various stuff to it, made alot of finishing touches, added a border.

Now for the other three of the family...